The true stories of injured construction worker Ralph Orlando and fever-delirious middle-aged railroad dispatcher John O'Connor capture the history of Mass General hospital, along
with the role that teaching hospital has played in the development of medical technology, better than any textbook ever could.
In his book Five Patients, best-selling author Michael Crichton uses a teaching technique that bloggers with a business message to convey would do well to imitate. Good business blogs, of course, offer valuable information to online readers. But, the technique Crichton used in his book can be bloggers' ace in the hole:
People want to do business with people.
People relate to stories about people, not to facts and statistics. As a professional ghost blogger for business and business blogging trainer, I realize that's one lesson we bloggers all need to tape to our computer screens: Let stories about people tell the story of your company, your products, and of the services you provide.
And who are the "people" to tell those stories?
- Your workers and service providers:
In blog posts, feature individual boots-on-the ground employees of your company who deal with the customers and solve their problems. - Your customers:
Use customer stories to show (rather than tell) exactly how problems and challenges were overcome step by step, using your expert advice or with adapting the products you sell to unique situations. - You:
Tell stories to illustrate how you came to choose this line of work, why you care so deeply about serving customers in this particular way, and showing some of the obstacles you've needed to overcome.
Whether it's politics or business, there's no denying the power of storytelling. In Tips & Traps for Marketing Your Business, authors Scott and Birk Cooper and Fritz Gruntzner confirm: "Customers don't want to feel like they are being told a brand story. They want to tell themselves the story. They want to be part of the story."
Michael Crichton offers valuable information about the ongoing progress of medical research, including the fact that surgical advance has been in great part dependent on increasing the effectiveness of pre-operative and post-operative procedures. But he shows us that with people stories, like that of 22-year old Peter Luchesi with the nearly severed hand.
So go ahead - in your blog posts, tell stories people to people. Get down and human!

While there’s no really positive perspective on the oil spill, as a professional blogger for business and blogging trainer, I have a really positive perspective on the technique the Star journalist used to make matters clearer to its readers. Helping online searchers take your “measure” could be considered the main mission of each of your blog posts.
Randy Michaels could have made an excellent blog trainer, but the
Indianapolis Zoo. Whoever wrote the copy for that placard promoting the zoo's new cheetah exhibit, though, would make a great blogger for business!
Under the old name, Indianapolis Economic Development Corporation, he explains, the organization was often confused with the state's IEDC, frustrating staffers and customers alike.
in Bloomington, or that it's IUPUI's law school, you're not alone - just about everyone confuses the two law schools, explains Norm Heiken of the Indianapolis Business Journal in
Three things Casey WIlliams never wants to see in his rear view mirror, he says in
"Regardless of what you're writing, whether it's a sales letter, blog post, company history, or proposal, the golden rule of clear communication should be communicating clearly,"
The same philosophy of simplifying a marketing message that's behind your elevator speech (that 15-20 second description of your company's product or service that you could rattle off while in an elevator with a stranger) works for print and electronic marketing, advises
“What’s the biggest problem Facebookers are confronting?” asks Scott Harris in Reader’s Digest.
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Fastened low on the wall near the door of the restaurant was a metal thing-a-ma-gig with coloring sheet handouts for kids to color. That day's handout had an outlined picture of a snowman talking with some penguins. There was space on the paper to fill in the child artist's name, age, and phone number, and a pocket in which to deposit the finished work.
"The best way to win an argument is to avoid it," advises Reginald Adkins in his
My children have children of their own, all older than kindergarten age, so what made me feel compelled to read that Indianapolis Star article about teaching kindergarteners? It was the number that aroused my curiosity: "
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